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Looking for an unforgettable experience? Today’s whale-watching trips were nothing short of epic.
The wind was blowing from the west this morning, but close to shore, it was calm enough for a perfect day at sea. As we left the Belmar Inlet, excitement buzzed across the boat. We had reports of 2 or 3 humpback whales spotted earlier off Spring Lake and Belmar. Everyone was scanning the horizon, hoping for that magical moment.
First, we headed north toward Asbury Park—where a whale had just been seen. Nothing. We kept moving to Long Branch. Still no sign. Then, just when we started to wonder if we’d get lucky, it happened.
A massive breach. A whale launched out of the water! We didn’t get the photo—but we got the memory. And that’s what really matters.
We watched him resurface near the boat, his glowing white pectoral fins shining beneath the surface like underwater wings. Another whale surfaced further out. It was a day of patience, pursuit, and pure awe.
Later, on our 4:30 PM trip, the whales didn’t make us wait long—within 15 minutes of leaving the inlet, we were with them. Two humpbacks right off Asbury Park gave everyone the up-close encounter they came for. The second trip may have been shorter, but it delivered big time.
We had great people on board today—travelers from Belgium and Switzerland, families from Jersey, and excited kids seeing whales for the very first time. It’s days like these that remind us why we do this.
🚤 Our boat, Jersey Girl, is heading out 3–4 days a week now, and once school is out, we’ll be sailing 7 days a week.
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Come make your own memories. We guarantee whale sightings.
Book your seat, bring your camera, and leave your worries at the dock.
Last-minute plans? Let’s go whale watching today!
